CMU Chapter 05 - Revision history

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	Poleen rides ~~sidesaddle~~ toward Vitolêô ~~with~~ Gibelê, the cigar ~~box hidden near~~ the Pillar of Ilûmnê, her ~~Forgetting veiling memories~~ of ~~Ezeldu and Benê. Vitolêô’s~~ tan buildings and ~~grand Cathedral~~ of ~~Ermûñô Tebedêz stir childhood awe~~, now ~~tainted~~ by ~~Ezeldu’s imprisonment~~ in the ~~Citadel of Netelu Dullûs~~. ~~Gibelê~~, a ~~former~~ Naval Guard, ~~fears~~ the city’s ~~treachery but escorts her~~ to the House of the Yellow Leaf~~. There~~, Trademaster Nokumor Orpingtun ~~reveals~~ the box ~~held indilus root~~, ~~not just cigars~~, ~~and panics~~ at ~~Poleen’s~~ mention of donu~~-honêsh~~, burning ~~evidence of~~ Humeric tû Yulêz’s ~~involvement~~. ~~He confirms Ezeldu’s arrest~~, likely ~~for indilus~~, ~~and urges Poleen to leave~~, ~~promising discreet inquiries~~. ~~A sudden hailstorm greets her exit, and~~ Gibelê, ~~sheltering nearby~~, ~~suggests~~ rooms at the Dew Flower Inn~~. Poleen agrees to wait~~ while he ~~investigates~~ Ezeldu’s ~~fate~~, her resolve ~~steeled despite~~ the ~~Notoholis Aprelêu’s shadow~~.
			Poleen Juvukis rides toward Vitolêô, her body swaying naturally in a sidesaddle despite her amnesia, the gulf of Tomulok’s dark waters looming as a stark reminder of her mission to free her mother, Ezeldu, from the Notoholis Aprelêu’s grasp. Accompanied by Gibelê, whose rapier and arming sword signal his readiness for trouble, she buries the cursed cigar case—laden with indilus roots and donu-laced cigars—near the Pillar of Ilûmnê, marking its hiding spot with an iron-streaked rock. The city unfolds before her, a dazzling facade of tan buildings and orange roofs, its grandeur marred by the grim reality of the Citadel of Netelu Dullûs’s prison, where Ezeldu likely languishes. Childhood memories of Vitolêô’s vibrant harbor clash with her mother’s warning about the city’s predatory nature, now underscored by the sight of warships like ''Errant Kiss'', their red banners signaling tensions with the Boboru and pirates in the Pinch. Gibelê’s cryptic disdain for Vitolêô, rooted in his past as a Naval Guard, deepens the city’s menace, yet Poleen clings to a flicker of hope that its courts might offer justice. As they pass beneath the High Gates, the guards’ indifference to their entry contrasts with the looming threat of searches for smugglers, setting a tense backdrop for their quest.

			In Vitolêô’s winding Snaking Lane, Poleen enters the House of the Yellow Leaf alone, seeking Trademaster Nokumor Orpingtun, the man who facilitated her acquisition of the deadly box. The gloomy office, lined with ledgers masquerading as literature, hosts a cautious dance of words. Orpingtun admits to the indilus but recoils at the mention of donu, burning a paper linking him to Humeric tû Yulêz’s ''Lontulvên'' cigars and urging Poleen to flee to protect them both. His abrupt dismissal, punctuated by a shove out the door, leaves her reeling as hail pelts the streets, a rare storm cloaking Vitolêô in fog. Reuniting with Gibelê under an awning, Poleen learns the cigars likely originated in Kartâ, possibly routed through Aprelêu, but the source of the donu remains elusive. Gibelê, wary of her impulsiveness, insists she secure rooms at the Dew Flower Inn while he probes the docks for answers about the donu and Ezeldu’s arrest. As the storm clears, Poleen acquiesces, her resolve to save her mother tempered by the city’s predatory undercurrents and the weight of the secrets she carries, each step a gamble in a maze where beauty masks betrayal.

	[[CMU Chapter 04]] — Third Treasure<br>[[CMU Chapter 06]] — Soaring Laughter		[[CMU Chapter 04]] — Third Treasure<br>[[CMU Chapter 06]] — Soaring Laughter

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	= <span style="color: #FFFFFF !important;">Chapter Five: Predator Street</span> =		= <span style="color: #FFFFFF !important;">Chapter Five: Predator Street</span> =
	Poleen ~~Juvukis~~ rides sidesaddle toward Vitolêô with Gibelê, the cigar box hidden near the Pillar of Ilûmnê, her Forgetting veiling memories of Ezeldu and Benê. Vitolêô’s tan buildings and grand Cathedral of Ermûñô Tebedêz stir childhood awe, now tainted by Ezeldu’s imprisonment in the Citadel of Netelu Dullûs. Gibelê, a former Naval Guard, fears the city’s treachery but escorts her to the House of the Yellow Leaf. There, Trademaster Nokumor Orpingtun reveals the box held indilus root, not just cigars, and panics at Poleen’s mention of donu-honêsh, burning evidence of Humeric tû Yulêz’s involvement. He confirms Ezeldu’s arrest, likely for indilus, and urges Poleen to leave, promising discreet inquiries. A sudden hailstorm greets her exit, and Gibelê, sheltering nearby, suggests rooms at the Dew Flower Inn. Poleen agrees to wait while he investigates Ezeldu’s fate, her resolve steeled despite the Notoholis Aprelêu’s shadow.		Poleen rides sidesaddle toward Vitolêô with Gibelê, the cigar box hidden near the Pillar of Ilûmnê, her Forgetting veiling memories of Ezeldu and Benê. Vitolêô’s tan buildings and grand Cathedral of Ermûñô Tebedêz stir childhood awe, now tainted by Ezeldu’s imprisonment in the Citadel of Netelu Dullûs. Gibelê, a former Naval Guard, fears the city’s treachery but escorts her to the House of the Yellow Leaf. There, Trademaster Nokumor Orpingtun reveals the box held indilus root, not just cigars, and panics at Poleen’s mention of donu-honêsh, burning evidence of Humeric tû Yulêz’s involvement. He confirms Ezeldu’s arrest, likely for indilus, and urges Poleen to leave, promising discreet inquiries. A sudden hailstorm greets her exit, and Gibelê, sheltering nearby, suggests rooms at the Dew Flower Inn. Poleen agrees to wait while he investigates Ezeldu’s fate, her resolve steeled despite the Notoholis Aprelêu’s shadow.

	[[CMU Chapter 04]] — Third Treasure<br>[[CMU Chapter 06]] — Soaring Laughter		[[CMU Chapter 04]] — Third Treasure<br>[[CMU Chapter 06]] — Soaring Laughter

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	Poleen Juvukis rides sidesaddle toward Vitolêô with Gibelê, the cigar box hidden near the Pillar of Ilûmnê, her Forgetting veiling memories of Ezeldu and Benê. Vitolêô’s tan buildings and grand Cathedral of Ermûñô Tebedêz stir childhood awe, now tainted by Ezeldu’s imprisonment in the Citadel of Netelu Dullûs. Gibelê, a former Naval Guard, fears the city’s treachery but escorts her to the House of the Yellow Leaf. There, Trademaster Nokumor Orpingtun reveals the box held indilus root, not just cigars, and panics at Poleen’s mention of donu-honêsh, burning evidence of Humeric tû Yulêz’s involvement. He confirms Ezeldu’s arrest, likely for indilus, and urges Poleen to leave, promising discreet inquiries. A sudden hailstorm greets her exit, and Gibelê, sheltering nearby, suggests rooms at the Dew Flower Inn. Poleen agrees to wait while he investigates Ezeldu’s fate, her resolve steeled despite the Notoholis Aprelêu’s shadow.		Poleen Juvukis rides sidesaddle toward Vitolêô with Gibelê, the cigar box hidden near the Pillar of Ilûmnê, her Forgetting veiling memories of Ezeldu and Benê. Vitolêô’s tan buildings and grand Cathedral of Ermûñô Tebedêz stir childhood awe, now tainted by Ezeldu’s imprisonment in the Citadel of Netelu Dullûs. Gibelê, a former Naval Guard, fears the city’s treachery but escorts her to the House of the Yellow Leaf. There, Trademaster Nokumor Orpingtun reveals the box held indilus root, not just cigars, and panics at Poleen’s mention of donu-honêsh, burning evidence of Humeric tû Yulêz’s involvement. He confirms Ezeldu’s arrest, likely for indilus, and urges Poleen to leave, promising discreet inquiries. A sudden hailstorm greets her exit, and Gibelê, sheltering nearby, suggests rooms at the Dew Flower Inn. Poleen agrees to wait while he investigates Ezeldu’s fate, her resolve steeled despite the Notoholis Aprelêu’s shadow.

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	Poleen Juvukis rides sidesaddle toward Vitolêô with Gibelê, the cigar box hidden near the Pillar of Ilûmnê, her Forgetting veiling memories of Ezeldu and Benê. Vitolêô’s tan buildings and grand Cathedral of Ermûñô Tebedêz stir childhood awe, now tainted by Ezeldu’s imprisonment in the Citadel of Netelu Dullûs. Gibelê, a former Naval Guard, fears the city’s treachery but escorts her to the House of the Yellow Leaf. There, Trademaster Nokumor Orpingtun reveals the box held indilus root, not just cigars, and panics at Poleen’s mention of donu-honêsh, burning evidence of Humeric tû Yulêz’s involvement. He confirms Ezeldu’s arrest, likely for indilus, and urges Poleen to leave, promising discreet inquiries. A sudden hailstorm greets her exit, and Gibelê, sheltering nearby, suggests rooms at the Dew Flower Inn. Poleen agrees to wait while he investigates Ezeldu’s fate, her resolve steeled despite the Notoholis Aprelêu’s shadow.		Poleen Juvukis rides sidesaddle toward Vitolêô with Gibelê, the cigar box hidden near the Pillar of Ilûmnê, her Forgetting veiling memories of Ezeldu and Benê. Vitolêô’s tan buildings and grand Cathedral of Ermûñô Tebedêz stir childhood awe, now tainted by Ezeldu’s imprisonment in the Citadel of Netelu Dullûs. Gibelê, a former Naval Guard, fears the city’s treachery but escorts her to the House of the Yellow Leaf. There, Trademaster Nokumor Orpingtun reveals the box held indilus root, not just cigars, and panics at Poleen’s mention of donu-honêsh, burning evidence of Humeric tû Yulêz’s involvement. He confirms Ezeldu’s arrest, likely for indilus, and urges Poleen to leave, promising discreet inquiries. A sudden hailstorm greets her exit, and Gibelê, sheltering nearby, suggests rooms at the Dew Flower Inn. Poleen agrees to wait while he investigates Ezeldu’s fate, her resolve steeled despite the Notoholis Aprelêu’s shadow.

	[[CMU Chapter 04]] — Third Treasure		[[CMU Chapter 04]] — Third Treasure<br>[[CMU Chapter 06]] — Soaring Laughter

	[[CMU Chapter 06]] — Soaring Laughter

	[[The Contessa of Mostul Ûbar]] - Main Chapter Listing		[[The Contessa of Mostul Ûbar]] - Main Chapter Listing

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	= <span style="color: #FFFFFF !important;">Chapter Five: ~~Crimson Memory~~</span> =		<span style="color: #FFFFFF !important;">Chapter Five: Predator Street</span> =
	Poleen Juvukis~~, clad in Gibelê’s spare clothes,~~ rides ~~a borrowed horse~~ toward Vitolêô, the cigar box ~~tied to her belt~~, ~~driven to rescue~~ her ~~mother~~ Ezeldu ~~from~~ the ~~Notoholis Aprelêu~~. ~~Her fragmented memories flicker—Ezeldu’s smile~~, a ~~man’s laughter~~, ~~possibly~~ her ~~father—but~~ the ~~Forgetting obscures her past~~. ~~At dusk~~, ~~she stops at~~ the ~~Tipsy Tankard~~, ~~a roadside inn~~, ~~where a drunkard’s lewd advance sparks a brawl~~. ~~Poleen’s predatory instincts erupt~~, ~~snapping the man’s wrist~~ and ~~felling others with lethal precision~~, her ~~strength uncanny. The innkeeper~~, ~~wary of her ferocity~~, ~~offers shelter but warns of Notoholis riders~~ nearby, ~~likely Nedrich nâ Hilêômbrâ’s men. A cryptic patron hints the cigar box holds more than cigars, tied to~~ the ~~Berjer tê Aprelêu’s schemes~~. ~~Fleeing before dawn~~ to ~~evade pursuit, Poleen learns~~ Ezeldu’s ~~ship departs Vitolêô soon~~, her resolve ~~hardened by Benê’s death and Juvukis’ Bloom’s ashes~~.		Poleen Juvukis rides sidesaddle toward Vitolêô with Gibelê, the cigar box hidden near the Pillar of Ilûmnê, her Forgetting veiling memories of Ezeldu and Benê. Vitolêô’s tan buildings and grand Cathedral of Ermûñô Tebedêz stir childhood awe, now tainted by Ezeldu’s imprisonment in the Citadel of Netelu Dullûs. Gibelê, a former Naval Guard, fears the city’s treachery but escorts her to the House of the Yellow Leaf. There, Trademaster Nokumor Orpingtun reveals the box held indilus root, not just cigars, and panics at Poleen’s mention of donu-honêsh, burning evidence of Humeric tû Yulêz’s involvement. He confirms Ezeldu’s arrest, likely for indilus, and urges Poleen to leave, promising discreet inquiries. A sudden hailstorm greets her exit, and Gibelê, sheltering nearby, suggests rooms at the Dew Flower Inn. Poleen agrees to wait while he investigates Ezeldu’s fate, her resolve steeled despite the Notoholis Aprelêu’s shadow.

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